Overall the story is good and I'm a big fan of post-apoc. fiction & gaming. It certainly provided more flavor & background for Darwin's World. However, the book is extremely wordy. There are over 400 pages and individual chapters are dozens of pages long. Sometimes the action is a bit slow & I think post-apoc. fiction, especially Darwin's World, should be more fast-paced. I recommend breaking the book down into smaller chapters and editing it to move the action along faster.
Rating: [3 of 5 Stars!] |