A good story and the story comprised most of the PDF. The Hellyssa was the focus this time and there were other characters introduced in a way that flowed with the story. Except for a "bathroom request" near the end, which seemed a out of place or forced, the dialog felt smooth and natural reenforcing the impression that the characters have had a history together. Everything was easy to read, the "hand written" text from "Chick Magnet" was no where to be found. As before, that are many little details to be appriecated here. The one that stood out to me is how peices of Hellyssa's past are revealed: framed as literal puzzle pieces. A nice touch! Great rendering, great characters, and a good story.
[5 of 5 Stars!]