The comic starts out slow. Things are just thrown out there with little set-up. The art is simple and could use more detail to fill it out.
The story jumps around a lot so you do not get into one part enough.
We do get to see the birth of Dartman. The costume design is actually pretty good.
This comic needed to be proof read or proof read better. There are grammar and spelling mistakes.
The scenes need to be filled out more so we know more about what is going on and by knowing more we would care more about the various characters and their lives.
Dartman does have potential and if done right could be a major super-hero character.
Richard Vasseur Jazma Online