Really nice! My party had a lot of fun with the ring of silence, using it to shut down the matriarch's spellcasting by chucking it into the middle of her chambers.
Are sahuagin considered intellectual property? Because the deep spawn are pretty clearly sahuagin, just reskinned to be transmuted humans rather than a distinct species. I just used standard sahuagin, the sahuagin priestess and the sahuagin baron for simplicity.
My only real complaint is something fairly consistent across a number of the mini quest line: Editing errors. There are punctuation and the occasional spelling error in a number of these books and I would recommend a proofreader. Heck I'd do it myself. Wouldn't be too hard since these are at most 6 pages long plus the obligatory SRD printing.
Overall excellent work, I look forward to seeing more!
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